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Old 05-21-2011, 11:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A Detective Story Collaboration

Reply to the most recent post. Here's the storyline to follow: When the Dude Gang kidnapps a 10 year old boy, rookie Detective Alex Glance must find clues and rescue the boy. THE CLUES ARE HARD TO FIND!!!

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DECTECTIVE GLANCE: Hero, carries pistol, a rookie detective, likes donuts.

SKYFIRE: Black belt in 7 martial arts, has a green fire shaped hairdo, fights with martial arts skill, Glance's best friend, likes donuts.

TYLR: Kidnapped kid, pretty calm about his situation, usually tied to a chair.

CRACK: Superstrong leader of the Dude Gang.


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Old 05-22-2011, 12:17 AM   #2 (permalink)
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So, we handle this as though we are writing a detective story, but where different people write different parts?
If that is the case, it sounds interesting.
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Old 05-22-2011, 01:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Dibs, I'm the kidnapped kid.
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So, we handle this as though we are writing a detective story, but where different people write different parts?
If that is the case, it sounds interesting.
I agree it does sound interesting if this is the way it's gonna be
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Old 05-22-2011, 12:40 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Then pick a character. Also, if more people happen to start liking the forum game, could more characters be introduced?
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Well, not exactly how I put it, but let's do it! Dibs on Skyfire!

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Then pick a character. Also, if more people happen to start liking the forum game, could more characters be introduced?
If it gets pretty popular, I'll make another one but with a diffrent genre, like sci-fi or fantasy.
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Old 05-22-2011, 07:07 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Okay so we need one more player to go if Aloha joins in.
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Not to be a center of attention but I'll be Detective Glance.
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Whoever chooses Crack, leave behind clues, make them hard.
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Hopefully DM is willing to take on the role. I'm sure he'll do a great job at making it complex.
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I want to be the bad guy but the name turns me off really must he be called Crack sounds like he's a walking drug attic. What kinda clues should I leave behind?

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But I would need time to make my part due to time difference
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I want to be the bad guy but the name turns me off really must he be called Crack sounds like he's a walking drug attic. What kinda clues should I leave behind?

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But I would need time to make my part due to time difference
I ment Crack as like cracking someone's bones.

Riddles would be nice.

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Who's gonna start us off before we start the game? I declare Jozman or whoever chooses Crack with the kidnapping scene![COLOR="Silver"]

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I'm waiting by the phone for a call from my men telling me that they succeeded with my plans. When the phone finally rings I press the button on the speaker to answer. "Well" I say. "No problem boss we got the kid" my man answers. "Good and as for my little note for Detective Glance" I say. "Placed all neat at tidy just the way you wanted it boss" my man answers. "Good good..." I say as I evil grin materializes on my face "Now get the brat to the appointed place and await further orders" I continue. "Yes sir" my man answers and hangs up. "Now Mr.Glance the ball is in your court how will you handle this" I think to myself as I start to laugh "Oh this shall be fun"

Well how is that for a opening?
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I step out of my car. "So, a kid named Tylr got abducted, huh? Where's Alex?" I ask."Detective Glance? He should be here any minute, Mr. Skyfire." Then a car pulls in. "There's Alex now." I reply.

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After just now hearing a report of a kidnapping I then drive the crime scene. If anything this could be my chance to prove myself. I then arrive at the crime scene and step out of my car.

"Hey Skyfire!" I yell, walking towards him, "You have any more news about this crime?"

Not the best first question, but I honestly don't know much, aside from what the radio says. Appearentlly, a kid got kidnapped from a gang called the Dude Gang, yes, that's the name.

Anyway, I walk towards Skyfire and await for what to do next.
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*thinking to myself because I'm gagged and tied up to a chair* I wonder why I got kidnapped....crap, my nose itches.

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After just now hearing a report of a kidnapping I then drive the crime scene. If anything this could be my chance to prove myself. I then arrive at the crime scene and step out of my car.

"Hey Skyfire!" I yell, walking towards him, "You have any more news about this crime?"

Not the best first question, but I honestly don't know much, aside from what the radio says. Appearentlly, a kid got kidnapped from a gang called the Dude Gang, yes, that's the name.

Anyway, I walk towards Skyfire and await for what to do next.
"It's about time you got here." I say to Glance. "I've probably heard as much as you have. Anyway, I've got a search warrent right here. I'll leave you in charge of investigating while get 4 more boxes of donughts." I jump into my car and drive away.
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*thinking to myself because I'm gagged and tied up to a chair* I wonder why I got kidnapped....crap, my nose itches.
My car drives up to the safe house I chose to keep the kid in thinking to myself "Dam I hate having to deal with this stuff if only his father had agreed to my terms and not sent Mace up the river for twenty years I would not have this problem". My car comes to a stop by the curb "Where here Mr.Crack" my driver says. "Good stay here while I go check on our guest" I say as I open the car door and walk up to the house. Upon nearing the door I hear someone yell "Come on Deon hold his legs down so I can tie him to the chair". "I'm trying Craz I'm trying" I hear another voice yell. My temper begins to flare as I slam open the house door "Dang can you two yell any more louder I don't think they heard you in China" I roar. My two men inside the house stop what they were doing and look over to where I'm standing and then both stand tall and proper "Mr.Crack sir we did not expect you so soon" one of them says as I see the brat hop up behind him and kick him in the but sending my man falling foreword landing on his face in front of me. "Why must I have idiots working for me" I ask myself.
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As I sit on the hood of my car eating a box of doughnuts, and begin to plan. I have been pretty infamous with the Dude Gang, maybe if I let myself be abducted and wear a homing beacon, the team could find me, but if the plan doesn't work, I could get myself out easy. I drive back to the crime scene to tell the others my plan.
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"It's about time you got here." I say to Glance. "I've probably heard as much as you have. Anyway, I've got a search warrent right here. I'll leave you in charge of investigating while get 4 more boxes of donughts." I jump into my car and drive away.
Great. Now I have to do this on myself, even though I never worked on a real case! All I know is, Skyfire better give me some glazedoughnuts or all hell will break loose!

Anyway, I then enter the house, and head to the main room where the crime took place, to look for clues.

Nothing here but broken lamps, tables that are on there sides, some evidence of a hussle, but that's all there is. No handprints, they must have used gloves. There are also no objects left from the hussle that wasn't the houses.

But then I come across a note and am interested. After reading it, I then put it in my pocket and grin. "Hmm," I said, "Its my first case an already I found a clue."

"What did you say Detectve Glance?" One of the cops say.. "Oh nothing." I say, I then leave the are and decide to interrogate the parents.

My inner concience tells me that was not wise but I shove a doughnut in its throat and its not talking now.

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Great. Now I have to do this on myself, even though I never worked on a real case! All I know is, Skyfire better give me some glazedoughnuts or all hell will break loose!

Anyway, I then enter the house, and head to the main room where the crime took place, to look for clues.

Nothing here but broken lamps, tables that are on there sides, some evidence of a hussle, but that's all there is. No handprints, they must have used gloves. There are also no objects left from the hussle that wasn't the houses.

But then I come across a note and am interested. After reading it, I then put it in my pocket and grin. "Hmm," I said, "Its my first case an already I found a clue."

"What did you say Detectve Glance?" One of the cops say.. "Oh nothing." I say, I then leave the are and decide to interrogate the parents.

My inner concience tells me that was not wise but I shove a doughnut in its throat and its not talking now.

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I step into the house carrying 5 boxes of doughnuts. "Hey guys," I say, "I've got an awesome plan!" So I tell everyone my plan. They agree to do it. Since Glance was gone, I sent him a text with my plan. I lay on the hood of my car eating doughnuts, waiting for a reply.
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I step into the house carrying 5 boxes of doughnuts. "Hey guys," I say, "I've got an awesome plan!" So I tell everyone my plan. They agree to do it. Since Glance was gone, I sent him a text with my plan. I lay on the hood of my car eating doughnuts, waiting for a reply.
I find the kids parents and ask them a few questions. Appearently, the kids father was apart of a big buiseness and since he has many clients, the father says it may be one of his clients but I don't know.

It seems like he has more to tell then he chooses to. But then all of a sudden my text ringtone goes off, of course it's a sound effect of a huge fart.

I then looked at the parents.

"Uh," I say, "Hold on please."

I then leave and get my phone out and open the text. "Glance!" t says, "I have a plan! i just found out the father's type of buiseness. It says he's had a couple of bad clients! We should probably check them first! Things are starting to unfold quickly! Meet me outside!"

That was it. After going stairs and leaving the house, I thne head to Skyfire. He starts to say something but I say "Hold it Jack!" "Where's the glaze first?!"

After giving me the glaze, I then say "Continue."
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My car drives up to the safe house I chose to keep the kid in thinking to myself "Dam I hate having to deal with this stuff if only his father had agreed to my terms and not sent Mace up the river for twenty years I would not have this problem". My car comes to a stop by the curb "Where here Mr.Crack" my driver says. "Good stay here while I go check on our guest" I say as I open the car door and walk up to the house. Upon nearing the door I hear someone yell "Come on Deon hold his legs down so I can tie him to the chair". "I'm trying Craz I'm trying" I hear another voice yell. My temper begins to flare as I slam open the house door "Dang can you two yell any more louder I don't think they heard you in China" I roar. My two men inside the house stop what they were doing and look over to where I'm standing and then both stand tall and proper "Mr.Crack sir we did not expect you so soon" one of them says as I see the brat hop up behind him and kick him in the but sending my man falling foreword landing on his face in front of me. "Why must I have idiots working for me" I ask myself.
I walk over to the kid and look him dead in the eyes he looks back at me a look of pure hate in his eyes I chuckle "Listen kid just cooperate with us and you won't get hurt I hate having to include kids in my operations you give us no trouble and you will be treated well" I tell the kid. The kid turns his head away as meaning to say "Forget you bub". "Well ain't we the wee bit testy" I say as my henchmen finally tie up his feet to the chair. I look over at a clock on the wall "Well if I'm right Mr.Glance must have found my little note by now" I say as I open up a nearby fridge and take out a cold soda a open it a take a slug. "What did your note say boss" Craz asks. "Roses are red violets are blue your partner smells ans so do you" I say with a giggle. Upon looking around I see that no one thinks that funny I walk over to Deon and grab him by the scruff of the shirt "Don't you think that funny Deon" I ask. "Um yes sir real funny" Deon says as his whole body start to shake with fear "Real funny" he continues as he starts to laugh I look over at Craz to see him laughing as well but theirs fear in his eyes this makes me smile as I release Deon and he crumples to the ground. "W...w....w...w... what did you really put in the note boss" Craz asks? I sit in a nearby chair "Dear Detective Glance hope you well and have not been killed yet, Any who heres a little poem for you to figure out with that low IQ score of yours The kid is safe but maybe not for long try looking in a place thats not by the barn maybe deep blue is what you seek nearby forty second street their is lot of houses that you will see but maybe I'm be there if you count to three" I say. "Do you think he will figure it out boss" Deon asks after calming down a little. "Well if he does he will found Tony waiting for him not me" I say. I look over at the kid "Hey Craz take that gag out of his mouth I want to hear what the kid thinks of all this but beware kid one yell and you won't like the outcome" I say as I give the kid a look like "Don't mess with me brat".

(Coming up with clues is hard if anyone wanna make some during their part please go ahead or let me know about it and I'll include it in my part)
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I find the kids parents and ask them a few questions. Appearently, the kids father was apart of a big buiseness and since he has many clients, the father says it may be one of his clients but I don't know.

It seems like he has more to tell then he chooses to. But then all of a sudden my text ringtone goes off, of course it's a sound effect of a huge fart.

I then looked at the parents.

"Uh," I say, "Hold on please."

I then leave and get my phone out and open the text. "Glance!" t says, "I have a plan! i just found out the father's type of buiseness. It says he's had a couple of bad clients! We should probably check them first! Things are starting to unfold quickly! Meet me outside!"

That was it. After going stairs and leaving the house, I thne head to Skyfire. He starts to say something but I say "Hold it Jack!" "Where's the glaze first?!"

After giving me the glaze, I then say "Continue."
"I'm going to let the Dude Gang capture me," I hold up a black thing and a tracking device. "I will be wearing this tracking device and a mike. The guys back at the house have the walkie talkie. Keep me informed." Before Glance could speak, I drove off.

I reach an old Dude Gang HQ. I must have set off a trip wire because gas was released. I fell to my knees coughing. I heard Glance's voice in my mike, he sounded really excited. But I couldn't hear him over the sound of gas and me coughing. That was all I remembered before I lost conciousness.
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