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View Poll Results: Do you like creepypastas?
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Old 04-02-2014, 05:50 AM   #1 (permalink)
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RU Creepypastas

Most of us like a scary story once in a while.
Let's tell some just for fun - they can be copied and pasted {like real creepy pastas} or original stories.

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This first one I based on a true story I once heard, which I have built upon to maximize the creepyness.
I hope you enjoy.

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The Russian Cabbage Experiment

An experiment was conducted in Russia to see if plants sense fear.

Living cabbages with electronic sensory devices attached to them were set on tables in rows inside a locked room.
The cabbage room had a window on each side of it to allow the researchers to make observations and take notes on what they saw.
Once the normal levels of the plants' electronic activities were recorded, they proceeded with the experiment.

One of the researchers was sent into the room wielding a meat cleaver.
They looked around at the cabbages as though crazed ..

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then viciously chopped one of the cabbages to pieces, while laughing maniacally.
MU ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!!!

Other researchers observing through the windows didn't report seeing anything unexpected, however, the electronic sensors picked up a distinct reaction from the cabbages to the entire event.

A few hours later, they sent that same researcher wielding the meat cleaver back into the cabbage room. . again, the person looked around the room at the cabbages with that same crazy look in their eye .. the sensors on the cabbages began going wild, burying the needle on their gauges!

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Suddenly, all the lights went out, leaving the researchers in total darkness.

Then they heard a mighty ear - splitting screech, as though a pack of feral cats were fighting .. but since the lights were out it was impossible for the researchers outside to see what was happening in the cabbage room .. they tried to open the door but it was locked , and since the lights had gone out no one could find the key to open it, either ..

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Researchers outside the room later reported they thought they heard the person inside the room yelling:

'No! Stay away! No! No! Please! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!'

, but it was barely audible above that terrible feline screeching .. they fumbled to get the lights back on to see what had happened, but found none of the switches worked.

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They tried to organize a party to go down to the basement to check the circuit breakers, but by that time many of the researchers had run away into the darkness, screaming in horror ..

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It was a full 3 minutes before someone finally found a flashlight and managed to make it back, with that cat - like wail still blasting forth from inside the cabbage room ..
A short time later the terrible wail diminished, then stopped.

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The cabbage room was now completely quiet except for a strange shuffling sound coming from inside ..

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One researcher with the flashlight found the courage to approach one of the windows looking into the cabbage room .. and when they shone the flashlight through the glass and looked inside, all their hair turned instantly white.

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The other researchers recoiled in horror at seeing this, as an eerie moan issued from the throat of the researcher holding the flashlight .. then the other remaining researchers turned and had a look through the window into the cabbage room ..

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Here's what they saw:
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In Russia, cabbages pickle YOU!


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The Canadian Tire Experiment


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Upon buying their first car, the proud new owner did what many people would to celebrate their purchase - they went to get car accessories.
While passing the tires section they noticed a better set of all season tires than what came with the car, on sale at an unbelievable price.
Knowing that having good traction is vital to safe and efficient driving, the new car owner wasted no time in purchasing and installing their shiny new tires.


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Immediately they noticed a huge improvement in the car's performance and patted themselves on the back for making such a wise decision.
Now they would be able to take that trip to the campground they'd been planning for a long time.


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It was on a winding mountain road, twisting and turning switchbacks flexing the tires of vehicles driving on it this way and that when it happened - one of the hubcaps came loose and rolled off, making a racket as it skittled off into the ditch, bouncing high into the air and disappearing into the forest below.
'Damn', the owner thought, and jokingly 'this is why I can't have nice things', laughing to themselves in an attempt to get over their frustration.


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After traveling almost all the way down through the switchbacks on the other side of the mountain they were almost at their destination when suddenly around the next turn they saw a flare on the road, followed by more flares and traffic cones.


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Anticipating there was a truck overturned {which is common on such roads} the driver slowed down and proceeded further around the bend in the road, expecting to see emergency vehicles and towtrucks on the scene, but instead they found themselves driving toward a military style roadblock, complete with armed soldiers and armored vehicles.
They had even put titanium tank barricades on the road to make certain no one passed unchecked.


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Feeling a bit nervous now, the driver slowly crept to the checkpoint and stopped when one of the soldiers signaled them to.
Then the most strange thing happened.
The soldier who had ordered them to stop asked the driver please to exit the vehicle and accompany them to a trailer at the rear of the blockade.
As the driver did so, the soldier immediately engaged the driver in conversation as though they were long time buddies meeting up and chewing the fat.
This manner of friendly, non - threatening conversation was welcome yet unexpected, and the more the soldier talked the more the driver began to feel uneasy.


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For one thing, the soldier didn't ask to see the driver's licence, vehicle registration, or anything.
The soldier didn't even ask the driver their name, just jumped right into the most familiar kind of lighthearted conversation about everything from what a nice day it was to how the forest smelled this time of year, to whether the driver thought the local sports teams would win the playoffs.


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After what seemed like 10 minutes of friendly conversation with the soldier in the trailer, a higher - ranking soldier appeared at the door.
This higher - ranking soldier also displayed a friendly attitude toward the driver, happy and cheerful, and gave the driver a chuck on the shoulder, saying:

'Well, I think we've taken up enough of your time, but I want to thank you very much for your cooperation and wish you a safe trip the rest of the way to the campground.
Goodbye now.'



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And with that the driver walked back past the vehicles and soldiers at the blockade, which oddly they were already disassembling, and got back into their lovely new car to continue the trip down the mountain to the campground.


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They'd driven only a few kilometers when, going around another sharp mountain road turn, there was again the sound of another one of the hubcaps popping off, and sure enough as the driver looked quickly to the passengers' side rear view mirror, they saw a hubcap bouncing high up into the air when it hit a stone at the side of the road, and away it went into the forest to join its mate.


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'Double Damn!' thought the driver when at that moment, a military helicopter came roaring over the mountain.
At first the driver was thinking they were taking the tank barricades back to the base or whatever, but then why was the helicopter hovering near the side of the road at the turn the driver just passed - right around where the hubcap fell off?


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Laughing, the driver was jokingly thinking to themselves how they were being spied on, but then .. then .. then
Slowing down quickly and pulling over to the side of the road, the driver stopped the car and put on their emergency lights.
Sitting in their now stopped car, the driver was thinking hard about what the commanding soldier had said to them at the roadblock:

'Well, I think we've taken up enough of your time, but I want to thank you very much for your cooperation and wish you a safe trip the rest of the way to the campground ...'


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The driver began getting a chill down their spine.
Had they or hadn't they mentioned their destination to either of the soldiers at the roadblock?
The driver couldn't remember clearly enough to know for certain; the experience was a bit stressful and so they could've said it .. they could've mentioned they were going to the campground .. but did they?


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Looking into the back of the car, the driver began to laugh at themselves again - of course - it was so very obvious that the driver was on their way to the campground: thermal cooler for the food and drinks, sleeping bag on the backseat, tent pegs sticking out of the end of a duffel bag.


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You silly, they thought to themselves as they rounded one of the last remaining switchbacks .. and saw flares on the road, then traffic cones, then soldiers waving for them to slow down, then military vehicles, including a tank this time and the helicopter he'd seen just a while ago hovering just above the titanium barricades.


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The driver thought how they'd been right about the soldiers using the helicopter to move the barricades, but not just down the road a bit.
And where the hell did the tank come from - did they just air drop it?
Clearly something huge was going on, but the driver decided to play it cool.


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The same friendly soldier as before greeted the driver, this time with the higher - ranking soldier with them, and both were chuckling and joking with the driver about how it was such a strange coincidence seeing them for the second time today - and again they asked - even more politely this time, for the driver please exit their vehicle and come with them to the little trailer.


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Only this time inside the trailer waiting for them was the apparent C.O. of the operation, an even higher - ranking soldier than the first two, but with a difference - this person wasn't very friendly at all.
In a most curt manner the C.O. asked the driver all the questions they'd expected to have been asked the first time around but weren't, and then some.
The driver knew they hadn't done anything wrong, and also that it was starting to get late and they would very much like to be on their way to the campground so they could pitch their tent before night fell.


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But before the driver could protest, or ask what was going on here and why had they been stopped twice that day, the C.O. suddenly announced:

'You can go now - and this time make sure you get to .. your destination.'
Shaken a bit this time and more confused than before, the driver left the trailer and again passed by the soldiers, their vehicles, and the tank.
Other soldiers had just begun hooking cables to the titanium tank barricades, and the helicopter was hovering lower with a cable to attach them to .. as if the project was complete and it was time to pack up and go home.


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This wouldn't have seemed quite as odd had it not been the second time the driver had seen it happen on their way down the mountain.
Wait a minute, thought the driver as they were just about to get back into their car .. they walked around the car and looked at their lovely new tires .. none of the hubcaps were missing!


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Furthermore when they gave an experimental tug to see if any of the hubcaps were loose, they all seemed as though they'd been welded on, and none of them would even wriggle in the least.


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The driver got into their car, started the engine, found a nice song on the stereo, and drove slowly down the rest of the way to the campground.
They pitched their tent before dark and even got a fire going.
As they sat enjoying a drink, looking at the fire, they swore they would never tell anyone what had happened that day, because no one would ever believe such a story anyhow.

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"I begin tucking him into bed and he tells me, 'Daddy check for monsters under my bed.' I look underneath for his amusement and see him, another him, under the bed, staring back at me quivering and whispering, 'Daddy there’s somebody on my bed.'"


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^
Not bad, if a bit short - all I mean is that story had potential.

Regarding The Canadian Tire Experiment, I apologize for the obvious mistake; the car owner should have bought a set of wheels, not just tires.
That's what you get when I write this stuff at 4 AM.
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Ok how about one without the word 'experiment' in the title.

The Drills

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The child's room was at the top of a small, two story house, and so a good portion of their ceiling was made up of the slant of the roof.
A slanted ceiling low enough for the child to touch, even while lying in their bed which was on one side of the room.

As with a lot of children, their parents left a light on in the hallway downstairs until they were sure the child had fallen asleep for the night.
The child's room was dimly lit by the light shining through the cracked door, and sometimes their imagination took flight, turning ordinary objects into horrific ghouls .. even though the child was already old enough to understand that it was only their imagination .. you know how it is.


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So it was on one of those nights when, as the child looked up at the slanted ceiling above their bed, they saw something happen.
It appeared as though, in a few places scattered about the paneling, the ceiling had uneven places .. like large. . something the child had seen before but couldn't quite place ..


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So, reminding themselves that it was only their imagination and so there was no reason to be afraid, the child lay watching with unblinking eyes at the uneven spots which had now revealed themselves to be triangular, no, is that a circle, or a triangle?


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The child tried to shake this off; what were they thinking?
Nothing could be coming through the ceiling - for one thing, they'd be getting wet, because it was raining outside and the child could hear the raindrops pelting the shingles above their head.
And of course, it was only their imagination.


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So the child shut their eyes for a few seconds, and looked again, and began screaming loudly for their mom and dad because they now recognized what the shapes were: drill bits.
Gigantic drill bits, turning very slowly, cutting into the child's room from outside.
As the child's parents came to the bottom of the stairs asking what was wrong, all the child could manage to yell was:

'Drills are coming though the roof, they're coming though the roof right here!'


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Naturally the parents climbed up the stairs toward the child's room, and, just as they were reaching for the light switch the child looked once more and saw several gigantic drill bits, shining black in the light coming from the doorway, and in the instant the light in their room was turned on, they vanished.


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Frustrated and crying, the child explained to their parents what they had seen and, even though it scared them horribly to do so, tried to show them the places where those giant bits had cut through the roof .. but of course there was nothing there .. no holes, no dust or broken bits of wood .. even the posters the child had put up were intact ..


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The child was overwhelmed with frustration, and collapsed onto the bed.
What they had seen saw was so real to them, so real, the mere thought of it raised the hair on the back of their neck now.
After a while, the parents were satisfied they'd calmed the child down and left the room, going back downstairs to their own beds but leaving the light on in the hallway as before.
They were worried the child was having nightmares that night, and expected they may be called upon once more.


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Some time later the child began yelling about 'the drills', even more loudly this time and also warning they 'watch out for the floor, because it's gone'.

From the child's perspective this was so; in reality, just outside the child's bedroom door was supposed to be a closet to the left, stairs down to the right, and another bedroom directly across the hall.
But what the child saw at that particular moment was quite different:


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The entire end of the room was gone.
No closet, no room across the hall, just a vague outline of the exterior walls and emptiness between.
The ceiling above was sort of there, but the child's attention was drawn to the floor, which was now a large pool of black water.
Ripples were shining in the light {from the hallway?} created by drips form an early 1900's style faucet, which was fitted to the end of a pipe coming up from the middle of what was (until now, apparently} the floor.


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Just imagination, the child reminded themselves.
A glance at the gigantic bits coming though the ceiling seemed almost reassuring by comparison to the dripping faucet and black pool of water at that point.
Several of them seemed to be cutting through faster than the rest and the child found themselves oddly wondering if they were made of the black water now covering the floor.


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No matter how frightening the drill gits should have been, they were nothing compared to the faucet dripping where no faucet should be, into water which could not be there, echoing loudly where no such echo should occur ... it all added up to madness, yet seemed more real than anything the child had experienced in their lives up to that point.


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Just like the first time, when the child's parents arrived, all the apparitions vanished instantly - the drills, the tap, the water - all the walls were back and so was the floor, the closet was visible through the open door, and the child was very relieved to see their parents found them again.


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The child grew up and had what you would call a normal life.
But no other experience they had ever seemed as real as what they'd experienced that night all those years ago.
Fifty years later and they can still hear the echo of the drips, see the ripples in that terrible black pool of water, see the gleam of those huge drill bits as the spun their way through the ceiling.
They often wondered to themselves; was that, in fact, not a dream, but a glimpse of the very fabric of reality itself?
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Tunnels

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One lucky young person got a job at a bakery in Chinatown, and was thrilled to be learning the secrets of baking specialty buns like the ones they loved since they were a child.
Perhaps with some luck, they too would one day open their own bakery!


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As time went on, the young baker got very good at making each of the many different varieties sold at the bakery, from cream buns to the more difficult and fancy ones with fresh fruit decorating the tops.


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Because the bakery made some of the tastiest buns in all Chinatown, they sold a lot of buns and, as a consequence, used a lot of ingredients.
So to save money they ordered exceptionally large quantities - which in turn meant the containers for the ingredients were larger than most people normally see.
What this also meant was the supply of ingredients such as flour would last a very long time before having to be replaced.


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So it happened that from the time this young baker started their job there, the bakery had been using up the same bag of flour, but now it looked like it was time for one of the employees to go fetch some more as the once - enormous bag of flour was nearly empty.


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Naturally, people went into the basement supply room all the time to get things like eggs or perhaps some other ingredients which stored nicely in the always - cool basement below the bakery.
Most of the time when an employee went down to get something they would return very quickly, and the young baker laughed at the stories people would tell about what they heard and saw while down there.


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As the boss was asking the youth to fetch up another huge bag of flour, they warned them not only to lift it properly and watch their footing on the stairs, but also to make it back as soon as possible and not to linger downstairs for any longer than necessary.


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The youth laughed inwardly, thinking to themselves how it seemed even the boss wanted to get in on the joke about the basement too, and wondered if perhaps they had one of the other employees hiding down there in a scary mask to pop out and frighten them .. or what.
The youth felt fully prepared, and, expecting some kind of surprise when they arrived, began down to fetch more flour.


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On the way down, the youth noticed not only how much cooler it was but also became aware of how quiet it was down there; not just quiet but seemingly sound - absorbent, as though the walls were designed for a recording studio or something.
This wouldn't have seemed strange except for the fact the walls in the storage room the youth was standing in were all covered with tiles - which should have created echos within the room from everything, from the sounds of their footsteps as well as the sounds of the bakery up above = but no, nothing.

Not even the buzzing of the flourescent tubes lighting the room could be heard from anywhere but the source.
Feeling they'd spent too much time downstairs, the youth hefted a 100 lb bag of flour up on their shoulder from where they were stacked near a door and made their way back upstairs quickly.


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About a week later, it became necessary for the youth to make another trip to the bakery's basement storage room, this time for some red bean paste.
The youth felt the hair on the back of their head stand up as they went down this time, and knew they would see something different when they got down there.
As they arrived at the bottom of the stairs, they noticed why their hair was standing up = the door next to where the flour was stacked was standing open, and a slight breeze was blowing from it.


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Looking through the open door by the light of the flourescent tubes in the storage room, all the youth could see was an unfinished sand floor, and total blackness beyond.
After a few moments, their eyes adjusted slightly and they were then able to see a bit further and could make out blackened brick walls, and what looked like a very long tunnel leading straight ahead with the faintest of light at the far end shining back.

Getting curious now, the youth decided to stick their head in the doorway to see if they could make things out a bit better from deeper within the darkness.
Carefully remaining inside the doorframe and hanging on with one hand, the youth stepped in and looked around the corner ..


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.. and was shocked by what they saw .. not only was their initial assessment of the area correct, with the sand floors and the long blackened brick tunnel leading straight from the doorway, the youth noted several such tunnels leading off in all directions, each looking like long corridors with what looked like open doorways at varying intervals along the length of each.


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Completely spooked by what they were seeing, coupled with the fact that all sound seemed deadened to the point of near silence in this area, the youth pulled themselves back around the corner by the hand they were hanging onto the doorframe with as quickly as possible .. but just as they were nearly back into the storage room with the now - comforting light, they looked down the tunnel leading the opposite direction they hadn't yet checked - and saw something.

Just as they looked at it, a shadowy figure moved from the center of the tunnel into one of the doorways along its length, as if to avoid being seen.
Although it had to have been more than 25 meters away, it frightened the youth so badly they grabbed the huge tub of red bean paste they'd originally come downstairs for and fairly flew back upstairs, stumbling and bashing their knee sharply on the stair on the way up.


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Frightened more than they had been by anything ever, the youth asked the boss what they'd seen down in the basement.
Instead of scolding the youth for not heeding their warning not to linger, the boss explained the best they could.


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'They've been down there since I started at this bakery, back when I was about your age.
In truth, there is no one downstairs we can find, but yet every employee we've had has seen them.
The best we can figure is, they are lonely spirits wandering around the emergency tunnels that were built when the city was first new.

No one knows who they were or why they'd be hanging around down there, but even when large search parties were sent in decades ago on the suspicion it was only transients living down there and stealing from businesses whose basements connect to the tunnels, the entire group would get spooked and have to leave very quickly.

This is why we're certain they are not living people down there; no food has ever been reported stolen, even from this bakery.
Besides, who would want to stay down there in the dark?
If there were living people we would have found candles or something, something, but we never did.
Most of the time we leave the door in the storage room you looked in closed, but we never lock it on the off chance those spirits down there and maybe they want to come say 'hi' once in a while.'


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After that the youth felt no better than they had before about going to the basement, and oddly, after their boss had told them the story of the emergency tunnels the door leading to them was found to be closed again.

About a week later, the bakery required yet another trip to the storage room for ingredients, and like before, the door leading to the blackened tunnel system again stood wide open.
Looking far ahead in the darkness, the youth thought they saw the same figure they had the first time duck into one of the many open doorways lining the tunnel, and decided the best thing to do was to smile and wave 'hi' while standing just inside the doorway to the storage room.
Just in case.
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The sudden realization you'd been doing something wrong without knowing it, then hoping it's not too late to fix it.

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