Original Demo - Behind

[Shades]

Check it out, give me your thoughts.

I recorded it a little bit ago, and its only a chorus and the bridge.

Enjoy, all your thoughts are appreciated.

I used an acoustic guitar and Yamaha's Pitch Fix.


Lyrics if you want them:

I waited for you
But you never pulled through
And now I'm all alone
Reaping these seeds that I have sewn
Now I hate how you treat me
You're completely out of your mind
If only you were kind
But now I must leave you Behind

In this moment all I have is fear
Running through my veins
All the pain has become so clear
Laughing as it reigns
I know what I lack
You
I couldn't get you back
Love was the path I couldn't find
Now you're nothing but behind

[Shades]

Would it be better if you could hear it in your browser instead of downloading it?

[TrakMastaTom]

I didn't see this before.

And here goes my honest opinion: I hate auto tune. It makes an otherwise good song sound awful. I like the guitar and the tune, but I hate the auto tune. It ruins it for me.

Of course I am probably in the minority if T-Pain is any indication.

[Slime Slayer]

good song, bad recording

[Dojah]

I agree bad recording, and pesonally I dont like that type of music. But I thought it was well put together and good lyrics for the soothing instrumentals. I say keep at it. I would also say you might as well just record it better and make a quick youtube video to get it out there, and more feedback.

[Shades]

Thanks guys, once I get some of the equipment together, I'll surely make a video with a more natural sound.