A Detective Story Collaboration

[Protoman Zero]

Reply to the most recent post. Here's the storyline to follow: When the Dude Gang kidnapps a 10 year old boy, rookie Detective Alex Glance must find clues and rescue the boy. THE CLUES ARE HARD TO FIND!!!

Characters

DECTECTIVE GLANCE: Hero, carries pistol, a rookie detective, likes donuts.

SKYFIRE: Black belt in 7 martial arts, has a green fire shaped hairdo, fights with martial arts skill, Glance's best friend, likes donuts.

TYLR: Kidnapped kid, pretty calm about his situation, usually tied to a chair.

CRACK: Superstrong leader of the Dude Gang.


That should get you started.

[Demon-Mask]

So, we handle this as though we are writing a detective story, but where different people write different parts?
If that is the case, it sounds interesting.

[joz]

Dibs, I'm the kidnapped kid.

[alohaex]

So, we handle this as though we are writing a detective story, but where different people write different parts?
If that is the case, it sounds interesting.

I agree it does sound interesting if this is the way it's gonna be

[joz]

Then pick a character. Also, if more people happen to start liking the forum game, could more characters be introduced?

[Protoman Zero]

Well, not exactly how I put it, but let's do it! Dibs on Skyfire!

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Then pick a character. Also, if more people happen to start liking the forum game, could more characters be introduced?
If it gets pretty popular, I'll make another one but with a diffrent genre, like sci-fi or fantasy.

[joz]

Okay so we need one more player to go if Aloha joins in.

[mario90s]

Not to be a center of attention but I'll be Detective Glance.

[Protoman Zero]

Whoever chooses Crack, leave behind clues, make them hard.

[joz]

Hopefully DM is willing to take on the role. I'm sure he'll do a great job at making it complex.

[alohaex]

I want to be the bad guy but the name turns me off really must he be called Crack sounds like he's a walking drug attic. What kinda clues should I leave behind?

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But I would need time to make my part due to time difference

[Protoman Zero]

I want to be the bad guy but the name turns me off really must he be called Crack sounds like he's a walking drug attic. What kinda clues should I leave behind?

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But I would need time to make my part due to time difference

I ment Crack as like cracking someone's bones.

Riddles would be nice.

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Who's gonna start us off before we start the game? I declare Jozman or whoever chooses Crack with the kidnapping scene![COLOR="Silver"]

[alohaex]

I'm waiting by the phone for a call from my men telling me that they succeeded with my plans. When the phone finally rings I press the button on the speaker to answer. "Well" I say. "No problem boss we got the kid" my man answers. "Good and as for my little note for Detective Glance" I say. "Placed all neat at tidy just the way you wanted it boss" my man answers. "Good good..." I say as I evil grin materializes on my face "Now get the brat to the appointed place and await further orders" I continue. "Yes sir" my man answers and hangs up. "Now Mr.Glance the ball is in your court how will you handle this" I think to myself as I start to laugh "Oh this shall be fun"

Well how is that for a opening?

[Protoman Zero]

I step out of my car. "So, a kid named Tylr got abducted, huh? Where's Alex?" I ask."Detective Glance? He should be here any minute, Mr. Skyfire." Then a car pulls in. "There's Alex now." I reply.

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Also, before I forget, if anyone's interested, I'm making a Megaman Zero 5 RPG. Here's the link to join: http://retrouprising.com/other/forum-games/megaman-zero-5-a/t11597/

[mario90s]

After just now hearing a report of a kidnapping I then drive the crime scene. If anything this could be my chance to prove myself. I then arrive at the crime scene and step out of my car.

"Hey Skyfire!" I yell, walking towards him, "You have any more news about this crime?"

Not the best first question, but I honestly don't know much, aside from what the radio says. Appearentlly, a kid got kidnapped from a gang called the Dude Gang, yes, that's the name.

Anyway, I walk towards Skyfire and await for what to do next.

[joz]

*thinking to myself because I'm gagged and tied up to a chair* I wonder why I got kidnapped....crap, my nose itches.

[CrispyChicken]

lmao, +1 Joz XD

[Protoman Zero]

After just now hearing a report of a kidnapping I then drive the crime scene. If anything this could be my chance to prove myself. I then arrive at the crime scene and step out of my car.

"Hey Skyfire!" I yell, walking towards him, "You have any more news about this crime?"

Not the best first question, but I honestly don't know much, aside from what the radio says. Appearentlly, a kid got kidnapped from a gang called the Dude Gang, yes, that's the name.

Anyway, I walk towards Skyfire and await for what to do next.
"It's about time you got here." I say to Glance. "I've probably heard as much as you have. Anyway, I've got a search warrent right here. I'll leave you in charge of investigating while get 4 more boxes of donughts." I jump into my car and drive away.

[alohaex]

*thinking to myself because I'm gagged and tied up to a chair* I wonder why I got kidnapped....crap, my nose itches.

My car drives up to the safe house I chose to keep the kid in thinking to myself "Dam I hate having to deal with this stuff if only his father had agreed to my terms and not sent Mace up the river for twenty years I would not have this problem". My car comes to a stop by the curb "Where here Mr.Crack" my driver says. "Good stay here while I go check on our guest" I say as I open the car door and walk up to the house. Upon nearing the door I hear someone yell "Come on Deon hold his legs down so I can tie him to the chair". "I'm trying Craz I'm trying" I hear another voice yell. My temper begins to flare as I slam open the house door "Dang can you two yell any more louder I don't think they heard you in China" I roar. My two men inside the house stop what they were doing and look over to where I'm standing and then both stand tall and proper "Mr.Crack sir we did not expect you so soon" one of them says as I see the brat hop up behind him and kick him in the but sending my man falling foreword landing on his face in front of me. "Why must I have idiots working for me" I ask myself.

[Protoman Zero]

As I sit on the hood of my car eating a box of doughnuts, and begin to plan. I have been pretty infamous with the Dude Gang, maybe if I let myself be abducted and wear a homing beacon, the team could find me, but if the plan doesn't work, I could get myself out easy. I drive back to the crime scene to tell the others my plan.

[mario90s]

"It's about time you got here." I say to Glance. "I've probably heard as much as you have. Anyway, I've got a search warrent right here. I'll leave you in charge of investigating while get 4 more boxes of donughts." I jump into my car and drive away.

Great. Now I have to do this on myself, even though I never worked on a real case! All I know is, Skyfire better give me some glazedoughnuts or all hell will break loose! >:(

Anyway, I then enter the house, and head to the main room where the crime took place, to look for clues.

Nothing here but broken lamps, tables that are on there sides, some evidence of a hussle, but that's all there is. No handprints, they must have used gloves. There are also no objects left from the hussle that wasn't the houses.

But then I come across a note and am interested. :waiting: After reading it, I then put it in my pocket and grin. "Hmm," I said, "Its my first case an already I found a clue."

"What did you say Detectve Glance?" One of the cops say.. "Oh nothing." I say, I then leave the are and decide to interrogate the parents.

My inner concience tells me that was not wise but I shove a doughnut in its throat and its not talking now.:disdain:

(PS I won't do the smilies anymore if its annoying.)

[Protoman Zero]

Great. Now I have to do this on myself, even though I never worked on a real case! All I know is, Skyfire better give me some glazedoughnuts or all hell will break loose! >:(

Anyway, I then enter the house, and head to the main room where the crime took place, to look for clues.

Nothing here but broken lamps, tables that are on there sides, some evidence of a hussle, but that's all there is. No handprints, they must have used gloves. There are also no objects left from the hussle that wasn't the houses.

But then I come across a note and am interested. :waiting: After reading it, I then put it in my pocket and grin. "Hmm," I said, "Its my first case an already I found a clue."

"What did you say Detectve Glance?" One of the cops say.. "Oh nothing." I say, I then leave the are and decide to interrogate the parents.

My inner concience tells me that was not wise but I shove a doughnut in its throat and its not talking now.:disdain:

(PS I won't do the smilies anymore if its annoying.)

I step into the house carrying 5 boxes of doughnuts. "Hey guys," I say, "I've got an awesome plan!" So I tell everyone my plan. They agree to do it. Since Glance was gone, I sent him a text with my plan. I lay on the hood of my car eating doughnuts, waiting for a reply.

[mario90s]

I step into the house carrying 5 boxes of doughnuts. "Hey guys," I say, "I've got an awesome plan!" So I tell everyone my plan. They agree to do it. Since Glance was gone, I sent him a text with my plan. I lay on the hood of my car eating doughnuts, waiting for a reply.

I find the kids parents and ask them a few questions. Appearently, the kids father was apart of a big buiseness and since he has many clients, the father says it may be one of his clients but I don't know.???

It seems like he has more to tell then he chooses to. But then all of a sudden my text ringtone goes off, of course it's a sound effect of a huge fart.

I then looked at the parents.

"Uh," I say, "Hold on please." :sweat:

I then leave and get my phone out and open the text. "Glance!" t says, "I have a plan! i just found out the father's type of buiseness. It says he's had a couple of bad clients! We should probably check them first! Things are starting to unfold quickly! Meet me outside!"

That was it. After going stairs and leaving the house, I thne head to Skyfire. He starts to say something but I say "Hold it Jack!" :stop: "Where's the glaze first?!"

After giving me the glaze, I then say "Continue."

[alohaex]

My car drives up to the safe house I chose to keep the kid in thinking to myself "Dam I hate having to deal with this stuff if only his father had agreed to my terms and not sent Mace up the river for twenty years I would not have this problem". My car comes to a stop by the curb "Where here Mr.Crack" my driver says. "Good stay here while I go check on our guest" I say as I open the car door and walk up to the house. Upon nearing the door I hear someone yell "Come on Deon hold his legs down so I can tie him to the chair". "I'm trying Craz I'm trying" I hear another voice yell. My temper begins to flare as I slam open the house door "Dang can you two yell any more louder I don't think they heard you in China" I roar. My two men inside the house stop what they were doing and look over to where I'm standing and then both stand tall and proper "Mr.Crack sir we did not expect you so soon" one of them says as I see the brat hop up behind him and kick him in the but sending my man falling foreword landing on his face in front of me. "Why must I have idiots working for me" I ask myself.

I walk over to the kid and look him dead in the eyes he looks back at me a look of pure hate in his eyes I chuckle "Listen kid just cooperate with us and you won't get hurt I hate having to include kids in my operations you give us no trouble and you will be treated well" I tell the kid. The kid turns his head away as meaning to say "Forget you bub". "Well ain't we the wee bit testy" I say as my henchmen finally tie up his feet to the chair. I look over at a clock on the wall "Well if I'm right Mr.Glance must have found my little note by now" I say as I open up a nearby fridge and take out a cold soda a open it a take a slug. "What did your note say boss" Craz asks. "Roses are red violets are blue your partner smells ans so do you" I say with a giggle. Upon looking around I see that no one thinks that funny I walk over to Deon and grab him by the scruff of the shirt "Don't you think that funny Deon" I ask. "Um yes sir real funny" Deon says as his whole body start to shake with fear "Real funny" he continues as he starts to laugh I look over at Craz to see him laughing as well but theirs fear in his eyes this makes me smile as I release Deon and he crumples to the ground. "W...w....w...w... what did you really put in the note boss" Craz asks? I sit in a nearby chair "Dear Detective Glance hope you well and have not been killed yet, Any who heres a little poem for you to figure out with that low IQ score of yours The kid is safe but maybe not for long try looking in a place thats not by the barn maybe deep blue is what you seek nearby forty second street their is lot of houses that you will see but maybe I'm be there if you count to three" I say. "Do you think he will figure it out boss" Deon asks after calming down a little. "Well if he does he will found Tony waiting for him not me" I say. I look over at the kid "Hey Craz take that gag out of his mouth I want to hear what the kid thinks of all this but beware kid one yell and you won't like the outcome" I say as I give the kid a look like "Don't mess with me brat".

(Coming up with clues is hard :sweat: if anyone wanna make some during their part please go ahead or let me know about it and I'll include it in my part)

[Protoman Zero]

I find the kids parents and ask them a few questions. Appearently, the kids father was apart of a big buiseness and since he has many clients, the father says it may be one of his clients but I don't know.???

It seems like he has more to tell then he chooses to. But then all of a sudden my text ringtone goes off, of course it's a sound effect of a huge fart.

I then looked at the parents.

"Uh," I say, "Hold on please." :sweat:

I then leave and get my phone out and open the text. "Glance!" t says, "I have a plan! i just found out the father's type of buiseness. It says he's had a couple of bad clients! We should probably check them first! Things are starting to unfold quickly! Meet me outside!"

That was it. After going stairs and leaving the house, I thne head to Skyfire. He starts to say something but I say "Hold it Jack!" :stop: "Where's the glaze first?!"

After giving me the glaze, I then say "Continue."

"I'm going to let the Dude Gang capture me," I hold up a black thing and a tracking device. "I will be wearing this tracking device and a mike. The guys back at the house have the walkie talkie. Keep me informed." Before Glance could speak, I drove off.

I reach an old Dude Gang HQ. I must have set off a trip wire because gas was released. I fell to my knees coughing. I heard Glance's voice in my mike, he sounded really excited. But I couldn't hear him over the sound of gas and me coughing. That was all I remembered before I lost conciousness.

[alohaex]

"I'm going to let the Dude Gang capture me," I hold up a black thing and a tracking device. "I will be wearing this tracking device and a mike. The guys back at the house have the walkie talkie. Keep me informed." Before Glance could speak, I drove off.

I reach an old Dude Gang HQ. I must have set off a trip wire because gas was released. I fell to my knees coughing. I heard Glance's voice in my mike, he sounded really excited. But I couldn't hear him over the sound of gas and me coughing. That was all I remembered before I lost conciousness.

My cellphone begins to ring I open it and check the caller i.d and see that it is my driver who so far has been waiting outside in the car for me to return I answer "Yes what is it..... I see yes so our old friend paid us a visit well thats interesting tell them to hold him I'll be there shortly to see why he graces us with his presence" I say and close the phone. "What going on boss" Deon ask? "It seems our old friend Skyfire decided to pay us a visit" I answer. "Skyfire" Deon asks "I thought he wanted noting to do with us" he continues. "Well it seems that that has changed I wonder what on his mind" I say as I clasp my hand togeter

[joz]

*whoa that dude's breath smells really bad...I wonder if I look at him with really angry eyes he'll back away? Co-operate? I'm tied up and gagged! I can't even scratch my nose! What a douche...*

[Protoman Zero]

I wake up, it's dark and cold. I get up feeling a bit woozy. I lean on the wall and wait for Crack.

[alohaex]

I wake up, it's dark and cold. I get up feeling a bit woozy. I lean on the wall and wait for Crack.

I arrive at one of my gang many hideouts after leaving Deon and Craz with the kid who seemed none to talkative at the present moment "Oh well not a problem as least he didn't yell dang I hate havening to involve kids but oh well a man has look out for his many investments now don't he" I think to myself. I enter a dark upstairs office from a back door and see one of my men by a window he glances over and upon seeing me nods and look back out the window as I walk over "Skyfire is over there against the right wall we just gassed him so he kinda out of it at the moment" he says. I look out the window and see Skyfire his head down eyes close leaning against the wall "Well lets see what he wants then shall we" I say as a flip a switch and light fills the hideout "Come with me" I continue as I open and walk out the front door of the office my man following. "Well Mr.Skyfire to what do I owe this lovely visit" I say as I descend the stairs.

[joz]

^Fart^ *why did I have to get kidnapped on Chilli Dog Friday? :( *

[Protoman Zero]

I sit there pretending to still be in asleep from the gas. One of the goons kicked me, but I made no movement. They muttered something and then the goons got me on my feet. They dragged me and handcuffed me to a pole. Good thing I studied Houdini's magic tricks.

[CrispyChicken]

LOL Joz XD +1 again :p

Nice job everyone. I was wondering if I could join it. I could be Craz or Deon :p

[alohaex]

Hey thats a good idea Chris it might give Joz more lines

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I sit there pretending to still be in asleep from the gas. One of the goons kicked me, but I made no movement. They muttered something and then the goons got me on my feet. They dragged me and handcuffed me to a pole. Good thing I studied Houdini's magic tricks.

I sit in a nearby chair stareing at Skyfire "Well Mr.Skyfire will you finally tell me while your here or will my men have to get it out of you me I perfer the latter" I say.

[Protoman Zero]

Hey thats a good idea Chris it might give Joz more lines

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I sit in a nearby chair stareing at Skyfire "Well Mr.Skyfire will you finally tell me while your here or will my men have to get it out of you me I perfer the latter" I say.
"The kid," I say, "That's all I came for." Using the magic of Houdini, I break free of the cuffs. I roundhouse kick Crac's side and smash his chair over his head. That should leave him uncoiuncess for a while. I race down down the hall way. I seal goons in a vault with a giant cube bomb that's counting down. In an empty room, I see the kid.

[alohaex]

"The kid," I say, "That's all I came for." Using the magic of Houdini, I break free of the cuffs. I roundhouse kick Crac's side and smash his chair over his head. That should leave him unconscious for a while. I race down down the hall way. I seal goons in a vault with a giant cube bomb that's counting down. In an empty room, I see the kid.

Skyfire thinks he knocked me out but he didn't all he did was synced in making me mad I get up off the floor and give chase. I see him lock up some of my goons in a vault but I don't care I'm mad and continue chase. I see Skyfire stop at a door looking in he has yet to see me so I reach out grab him by the throat and hurl him into the room. I then rush him and give him a series of quick jabs in the stomach I can hear some of his ribs crack upon impact making him fall to his knees in pain holding his stomach I kick his feet out from under him he collapses to the floor. "The kid you came for the kid Skyfire did you truly think I would be so foolish to leave him here" I yell as I walk over to what looks like the kid sitting in a chair and grab the figure by the head and toss it over to Skyfire "You see only a dummy just like you" I continue. Skyfire stares at me I walk over to him grab him by his neck and lift him up so his eyes is leveled with mine "You will never find the house he's at because you will be in the hospital" I roar as I punch him hard in the stomach knocking the wind out of him and then throw him across the room were he hits his head on the wall and passes out. I head toward the door "Don't you ever demand anything from me again or your name won't be the only thing about you that involves fire" I say as I leave

[Protoman Zero]

There I lay crippled. He thought he cracked my ribs, but they were my legs. I dragged myself to a diffrent part of the room, and I discover robot parts that the Dude Gang used years ago. I take leg parts that look like the ones Mega Man uses. A filler later, I get the legs on. I can run faster with these awesome legs! I then find the exact-replica of the original Star Trek phaser. It even shoots real phaser beams! I put it in my pocket and follow Crack.

[joz]

*when am I going to get rescued already? Wait, what's that I hear?*

[CrispyChicken]

*Huh...why does that kid smell so bad?*

"So uh...kid...eat any chili lately?"

EDIT- I'm Craz by the way.

[joz]

*does he really expect me to answer that? I'm gagged! And how does he know I've had chili today? The pervert was probably stalking me.*

[alohaex]

There I lay crippled. He thought he cracked my ribs, but they were my legs. I dragged myself to a diffrent part of the room, and I discover robot parts that the Dude Gang used years ago. I take leg parts that look like the ones Mega Man uses. A filler later, I get the legs on. I can run faster with these awesome legs! I then find the exact-replica of the original Star Trek phaser. It even shoots real phaser beams! I put it in my pocket and follow Crack.

Hey no fair I call foul :time-out:

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Since when can we use robot parts to repair our selves are we part cyborg or something?

[CrispyChicken]

*Hmm...So he's the quiet one eh? Ah well...*

[Craz Falls asleep, snoring loudly]

[mario90s]

Well, Skyfire isn't answering, I got a whole army and I don't know what to do. But hey at least I still have glaze. :D

Mmm glaze.:}

Anyway, I then make up an awesome plan I just thought of. "Listen" I say to the cop army, "You go to headquaters and research on the Dude Gang," good god that still sounds lame. "I meanwhile will locate Skyfire with my gun as my onlly weapon!"

I then hop in my as some other cops jon me. "Hey!" I say, "Weren't you listening to the plan?!" >:(

"But sir!" they say, "You can't possibly battle the dude gang-"

"DENY NOT THE PLAN!!!!" I yell. :at-wits-end:

They hen get out as I throw most of my bullets at them! That'll teach 'em! :disdain:

[alohaex]

My goodness your a mean detective ain't ya taking potshots at your men :lol:

[Protoman Zero]

Hey no fair I call foul :time-out:

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Since when can we use robot parts to repair our selves are we part cyborg or something?
Well, since your peeps had the parts, I guess you guys can buid security bots

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Well, Skyfire isn't answering, I got a whole army and I don't know what to do. But hey at least I still have glaze. :D

Mmm glaze.:}

Anyway, I then make up an awesome plan I just thought of. "Listen" I say to the cop army, "You go to headquaters and research on the Dude Gang," good god that still sounds lame. "I meanwhile will locate Skyfire with my gun as my onlly weapon!"

I then hop in my as some other cops jon me. "Hey!" I say, "Weren't you listening to the plan?!" >:(

"But sir!" they say, "You can't possibly battle the dude gang-"

"DENY NOT THE PLAN!!!!" I yell. :at-wits-end:

They hen get out as I throw most of my bullets at them! That'll teach 'em! :disdain:
I want a new partner!

[mario90s]

I want a new partner!

Hey, aren't you the one whose abandoned your partner twice in one case? :P

Besides, its not my fault, he's a rookie.

@alohaex. Ok, throwing bullets is a bit mean, but I ment literally throwing the bullets, not shooting the bullets.

[Protoman Zero]

I meet up with Glance and we reach the place where Crack is keeping the kid. I hand Glance a metal control panel. "What's this?" "It's an Opacitator. It makes you invisible.Turn on the Opacitator and throw grenades and shoot the goons with the weapons I stored in your trunk. Make them hide in the Storageroom and make sure they close the blast doors. Once they do, they should be a computer panel next to the door. Activate the Genesis Lockdown. The password to activate it is Rick Roll'd." Then I hand him a box with a button and a atenna. "In the Storage Room, there should be a box with a nuclear sign on it. Pull the atenna out as far as it can go and point it at the box, then press the button. It should activate what the Dude Gang call the Genesi Bomb. We have 5 minutes before the bomb incinerates the entire building. I'm getting the kid."

[mario90s]

After taking that all in, I'm now relieved my plan to go in totally weaponless and with no reinforcements worked!:D Though I was worried it would betray me.

I then turn on the opacitator and go to my trunk and look for the grenades and guns. I only find glaze doughnuts in case of emerginces :disdain: plus the grenades and guns though they weren't there before ???.

I then a doughnut and procede into the building!

[CrispyChicken]

[Craz slowly slides off chair and hits floor...Continues to snore]

[alohaex]

I'm in the house that were keeping the kid when I hear nosies from outside sounds like someone I know I look outside and see Skyfire with robot legs "Oh so not as hurt as I thought you were were you Sky" I think to myself as I see him and someone else unload there car. "Well I think it time to have a little fun" I think to myself as I walk over to a nearby table grab a controller that was on the table and turn it off I then look out the window to see that Skyfire has stopped in his tracks. I chuckle then I start manipulating the controls that are now in control in Skyfire legs as I walk him over by his friend and make him kick his friend in the but multiple times. I look over at Deon and say "Make your self useful and release the security bots you nitwit".

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"Also see if you can wake Craz up that dummy would sleep through a war if you let him"

[Protoman Zero]

I rip of the robot legs. I then find what looks like some sort of reciver. I pull it out. "Sorry," I tell Glance, "It appears that the coward knows we're here. We've got to hurry!"

[joz]

* Hmmm....this knot isn't that secure....maybe if I wiggle around a bit I might be able to get freed!*

[Protoman Zero]

Also, since this is almost over (I think) I'm starting another collaboration forum game. I'm calling it Megaman Quint's Revenge http://retrouprising.com/other/forum-games/megaman-collaboration-revenge-quint/t11790/#post186388

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I burst into the building. "CRACK! WHERE ARE YOU COWARD!" No response. I then take out two uzis and shoot at everything. I wait.

[mario90s]

OW! I got shot! :excruciating:

"Watch were you shooting Skyifre!" :at-wits-end:

But then I remember the doughnut I took. Oh yumy. :}

I eat the doughnut. And they say doughnuts can't be usedfor emergencies. :disdain: HA! I laugh at those people.

[Protoman Zero]

"Well, you're kinda invisible." I reply. I wait for Glance to leave, then I eat the rest of the donughts in 5 seconds flat.

[mario90s]

"Buddy." I say while I hold a rock. "If you know what's good for you, drop the doughnuts now." >:(

[Protoman Zero]

"Who bought them? I believe I did. You've probably had more than your share."

[CrispyChicken]

[Craz wakes up from hearing gunshots]

"Huh!? What the hell was that!?"

[Craz reaches for gun and pulls it out. He looks at the kid who is still tied up. Craz exits the room and goes to locate the source of the gunshots]

[alohaex]

I enjoy watching Glance and Skyfire fight . With all of Skyfire shooting he still missed me he was not the best marksman ever. I continue watching Skyfire and Glance fight as I load my missile launcher thinking to myself "Dang those doughnuts look good I'm hungry". When I finally finish loading I jump up from behind my cover aim and yell "Viva la Doughnut" and start firring surprising Skyfire and Glance with a mess of missile fire

[CrispyChicken]

*Whoa! Sounds like the boss has it covered in there!*

[Craz peeks around the corner and watches Crack fire at Glance and Skyfire]

[alohaex]

I notice Craz "And where were you when all hell broke loose when I finish here your in big trouble as for now get the kid out of here" I yell.

[Protoman Zero]

"I got Crack, go kill Craz any way you want." I say.

[CrispyChicken]

"Oh! Um, right boss!!"

[Runs back to room with kid]

[alohaex]

With all of Skyfire shooting he still misses me I swear he must have shot off a hundred shots "Man his aim gotten worse" I think to myself. "Skyfire just give up your only making it harder on yourself let me blast you to a million pieces already" I yell over all the noise our weapons make

[Protoman Zero]

With all of Skyfire shooting he still misses me I swear he must have shot off a hundred shots "Man his aim gotten worse" I think to myself. "Skyfire just give up your only making it harder on yourself let me blast you to a million pieces already" I yell over all the noise our weapons make

I then pull out a minigun and continue to shoot.

[alohaex]

Still he misses what a bad shot. I stop firring and walk over to Skyfire in a rain of bullets that still misses me and take his gun away

[Protoman Zero]

Still he misses what a bad shot. I stop firring and walk over to Skyfire in a rain of bullets that still misses me and take his gun away
I then put Crack in a head lock, "I should have killed you when I had the chance." The more Crack struggled, the tighter I squeezed. Man, how much air does this guy have. He just refuses to die.

[alohaex]

I hit Sky in the stomach hard taking his breath away he release his hold on my a little and I grab his arms and throw him across the room. "You will never kill me Sky you don't have the string to and you never will" I say as I rush him as Sky stands up and gets into a defense stance

---------- Post added 05-30-2011 at 03:10 PM ---------- Previous post was 05-29-2011 at 09:35 PM ----------

Oh darn it noticed a spelling error in my last post. Instead of saying "You will never kill me Sky you don't have the string etc." I meant to say "You will never kill me Sky you don't have the strength etc.". Sorry about that

[joz]

*I'm never going to get rescued, guess I have to do things myself. Let me see if I can break this chair.* (jump, jump jump....falling over now) Too bad I was next to the stairs. I feel down and broke my neck. Now I'm dead.

[Protoman Zero]

I pull out a flamethrower and make sure Crack is caught in the flames.

[alohaex]

Sky flames only last for a mintue because he forgot to fill the tank with fuel. I then hear a crashing noise "What the heck was that" I say looking all around.

[Protoman Zero]

Using this moment, I pull out a shotgun and blow a hole in Crack's chest.

[CrispyChicken]

[Craz heads for the staircase when he notices the dead kid]

"What the !@#$ is going on!!??"

[Craz looked at the body and got sick to his stomach. After throwing up all over the body, he cried for a few seconds and then decided to go back to Crack to give him the news]

[alohaex]

I cover the hole in my chest with my hand it seemed to have missed my vital organs I glare at Skyfire "You little punk your going to pay for this" I say as I pull a out mini shotgun out from a it holder that I had on and return the favor by blasting a hole in Skyfire chest. It is then that I notice Craz who walked over and tells me about that the kid is dead I grab him by the throat and lift him off the ground squeezing "The kid is dead what the hell you guys were suppose to be watching him" I yell as I toss Craz across the room. "Did you hear that Skyfire the kids dead but it's not by my doing so what do we do now" I say as my chest begins to really hurt.

[CrispyChicken]

[Craz smashes into a bunch of boxes but appears alright]

"You should kill him boss! He's been nothing but trouble! Here take this!"

[Craz reaches into one of the boxes and pulls out the best shotgun money can buy and tosses it to Crack]

[alohaex]

Dang my chest really hurts was I right in thinking that Skyfire shot missed my vital organs or did he really hurt me "Dang it I can't think of this now" I tell myself as I catch the shotgun Craz tosses to me. I ready the gun aim for Skyfire head and fire.

[mario90s]

I then jump in front of Skyfire and take the gun fire myself. I then hit the ground as the world starts to spin. Why didn't I wear a bulle proof vest again?

But now wasn't the time to be weak! I then look at Crack and laughed.

"Ha, ha, HA!" I yell as ki start to breathe a bit heavyly, "Take that Crack!"

I then get up slowly and pull out my own pistol.

"Now its my turn!" I then aim at Crack's head and fire.

[alohaex]

"Boss" I hear Deon yell and from out of no where he jumps in front of the bullet and take the shot for me he lands on the floor with a thud holding the side of his chest I can see blood on his shirt and a grimace on his face. As for me the pain in my chest is getting worse by the minute I reload my shotgun aim and fire then collapse onto the floor "ugh the pain I burn all over" I think to myself "I gotta get up". I get up onto my knees feeling weak

[mario90s]

"Skyfire" I say, breathing very heavily, "I don't think (pant) I can take any more of this (pant). Oh look. Where'd tht blood come from?"

I then fall to the ground.

[Protoman Zero]

I stare with horror at Glance. "You, you monster! YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT!" and throw a powerful punch to the stomach. I then charge at Deon and throw a punch that went right through his chest. I pull my fist out and Deon crumples to the ground dead.I pull out the phaser that I had completly forgotten about and point it at Crack. "Austa la vista, baby." and pull the trigger and watch Crack turn orange as he is incinerated. I then pull out my phone and call 9-1-1.

[mario90s]

I hear screams, some bullet shots, and a phone. I then try toget up but fall and instead at Skyfire.

"Hey (pant) buddy," I say, "You think (pant) we can get doughnuts?"

He my have thought that was a poor attempt at comfort but i was really hungry!

[alohaex]

"You think me dead so soon Mr.Glance no no I'm not so easily killed" I groan as I hobble out of the flames of death that Skyfire put me using the shotgun as a cane. My body is charred and burned my chest feels like it's going to explode but still I walk over to the two of them I kick Glance out of the way and grab Skyfire shirt "No Sky you will join me in the embrace of death" I groan as I put the shotgun to his chest and fire then I collapse onto the ground I can feel the cold embrace of death welcome me

[CrispyChicken]

*Boss!!! Damn it! I'll avenge you boss!*

[Craz stares at Glance as he slowly takes out a pistol and moves toward him. Glance is kneeling, talking to Skyfire who was just shot]

[Craz sneaks up behind him and loads the gun, putting it against the back of his head]

[mario90s]

I feel something on my head. But I'm not worried. I then just kick Craz in the jewels and try to get back up. Blood is everywhere. I then get y own phone and dial 9-1-1.

"Hello (pant) I (pant) need help." I brethe heavily as I fall again, I tell them the location and everything. I thengrab the gun Craz had and hit him with the gun handle but I don't kill him.

Is it stupid not to? Maybe. But I perfer not to get in bloodbaths all the time from now. I then pass out.

[CrispyChicken]

[After getting hit in the "jewels"]
*High Pitched* "Da...mn...."
[Craz makes a thud as he hits the ground and is knocked out by Glance]

[Protoman Zero]

I take a gun and shoot Craz in the head. "There." I thought. "It's over." I hear an ambulance. I pick up Glance and carry him to the medics.

I step into Glance's room. Still uncoincess. I drop off 10 boxes of glazed doughnuts and leave. As I leave, a medic rushes past me. I pull out my gun and shoot him.

To be continued in episode 2

[alohaex]

Question I shot you in the chest at point blank how come your allright?

[CrispyChicken]

A lot of this doesn't seem very realistic :p Skyfire and Crack got shot like 6 times each with shotguns and rifles and miniguns and lived XD Somehow they survived with holes in their chests o.o Skyfire has a hole in his chest, was shot at point blank with a shotgun, and lived while Deon got punched through the chest (somehow XD) and died. I don't really get it lol.

[Protoman Zero]

A lot of this doesn't seem very realistic :p Skyfire and Crack got shot like 6 times each with shotguns and rifles and miniguns and lived XD Somehow they survived with holes in their chests o.o Skyfire has a hole in his chest, was shot at point blank with a shotgun, and lived while Deon got punched through the chest (somehow XD) and died. I don't really get it lol.

We survive cuz were the good guys and it was the punch of rage.

[alohaex]

We survive cuz were the good guys and it was the punch of rage.

Oh dear how corny :lol:

[CrispyChicken]

Alright then :p

You going to right some type of Epilogue or is this going to become a sequel or something? :p

[mario90s]

Alright then :p

You going to right some type of Epilogue or is this going to become a sequel or something? :p

Don't Know. Do the words To be continued in episode 2 mean anything to You? :P

[RU Joe]

Frankly I'm surprised at the amount of gunplay; it's like everyone who contributes just wants to fire their guns.
Maybe we should write a war story instead?

Joe instinctively pulls his gas mask down as the enemy shells explode in behind him, then notices the familiar, wispy vapor swirl around his body, pouring into trench in front of him ... and reacts in an instant sounding the alarm:

'GAS! GAS! GAS!'
... and luckily his comrades manage to pull their gas masks on as well, just in time to greet the enemy Soldiers now pouring out of their trenches in hordes, hollering their battle cries as they swarm toward Joe and his squad in a desperate attempt to gain ground after so many days of constant fighting.

'OPEN FIRE, FIRE AT WILL!'

... you guys like?

[alohaex]

Wow remind me to join you when war breaks out :lol: